IELTS Writing Band 9 task1 단어정리 (1)

아이엘츠 라이팅 연습

라이팅은 아무리해도 7이 안나오고 6.5까지 밖에 안나오는걸 보니
아무래도 평상시에 영어에서의 문제점을 안짚고 넘어 갈 수가 없네요.

특히 구지 어려운 어휘를 안써도 되는 상황에서 억지로 어려운 어휘를 안쓴다는게 저의 단점입니다.  
시험은 뽐을 내는 자리인데, 뽐내기를 거부하면 7점이상을 받기어렵겠지요.

물론 안쓰는 이유는 여러가지입니다. 정확하게 몰라서, 애매하게 썼다가는 틀릴까봐 등 등
앞으로 simon 밴드9 라이팅을 연습하면서 필요한 어휘들을 이곳에 정리하고 반복해 볼까 합니다. 

 

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 -의 양 
amount that /
ex) The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s sporting activities

-에 참가한 사람
who took part in

ex)  the number of British children who took part in

-개의 다른 -에 
three different sth s/es

ex) three different sports

매년 -에 돈을 더 많이 쓰다
spent more money each year on
ex) spent more money each year on

지난 -년의 기간 동안
over the 00-year period

ex) over the six-year period

 

-의 수에 대해 이야기 하자면
In terms of the number of A 

ex) In terms of the number of children taking apart football 

-에 참가 하다
take apart 

ex) children taking apart football 

- 상당히 더 인기가 있다
significantly more popular

ex)  football was significantly more popular than athletics

-에 참가 하다
take apart 

ex) children taking apart football 

 

육상경기
athletics

ex) more popular than athletics and swimming.

 

평균적으로 한달에 20파운드를 A에 사용한다
spent an average of around 20 pounds per month on
ex) British parents spent an average of around 20 per month on their children's sporting activities.

아이들의 체육활동
Children's sporting activities.
Children’s sports

그 후 6년에 걸쳐서
over the following six years
ex) Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually over the following six years

한 달 평균 양
The average monthly amount
ex) the average monthly amount had risen to just over 30.

-까지 올랐다.
Had risen to
ex) Had risen to just over 30

참여숫자를 보자면
Looking at participation numbers

-가 ~하는동안, -는 ~했다.
문장 , while 문장
ex)  in 2009, approximately 8 million British children played football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practice athletics.

-에 등록하다
were enrolled in
ex)  only 2milion children were enrolled in swimming clubs

비교적 안정적이 었다.
remained relatively stable 
ex)  The figures for football participation remained relatively stable over the following 6 years. 

대조적으로
By contrast (conversely)

두배가 되다
doubled
ex)  participation in swimming almost doubled.

다섯배의 성장
fivefold increase
ex)  To nearly 4 million children, there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.

-의 성장
increase in

거의
nearly
ex)  nearly 4 million children